Monday, 2 May 2011

Evaluation

My photographic storyboard is based on 'vampire movies' a sub genre of the horror genre. This genre has its own codes and conventions, I made sure that I applied some of these codes and conventions to my storyboard so that it would fit into the genre and become easily recognised what genre it is when the audience are watching. The ‘Vampire Movie’ has is own conventions, I included some of these for example: Fangs - fangs are seen as the most important feature to a vampire. This convention comes from early vampire films such as: Dracula (1931) made by Universal Studios and Dracula (1958) made my Hammer. Another is: Vampires having no reflection – when Ellen looks into her pocket mirror she sees that she has no reflection.  The convention of vampires not being able to be in sunlight as it ‘burns’ them, I have also used for when Ellen steps out into the sun and is struck by a burning sensation on her skin. This convention has been in many ‘vampire movies’ such as a more recent vampire films e.g: 30 Day of Night (2007). When Ellen steps out into the sunlight there is also a hint of glowing coming from her skin, I got this idea from the massive franchise of: The Twilight Saga, the vampires seen in these films, skin glistens when in sunlight, I adapted this idea to a slight glow for the skin of my vampire character. As well as using conventions from the ‘vampire movie’ sub genre, I included conventions from the main Horror genre too. Some of these include: low key lighting, and isolated location (the forest) and the ‘monster’, being Ellen in my narratives case and the use of blood. Although I did challenge some conventions within my narrative as usually the vampire movie tends to feature male characters preying upon female victims, compared to in my narrative where Ellen a young female is preying upon a male.   
The target audience would be in the age range of 15-25 because people in this age range are most attracted to the Horror Genre. However the content could be seen as graphic due to the 'gore' shown and therefore the certification given to this could be 18, making the target audience change to 18-25. This film wasn't aimed at a certain gender, as males and females both like to watch horror films. Although, stereotypically horror films are watched predominately by a male audience.
My story could be seen as mainstream due to most mainstream movies coming from Horror, Adventure/Action, Thriller genres and my story fits into the Horror Genre. It can also been seen as mainstream due to the recent explosion of  vampire movies due to major success of the twilight saga and vampire movies seem to attract audiences in due to this. However it can be seen to be on the indie scene as it’s a low budget, British horror which does not seem to attract masses of audiences, due to it not being all fancy and financed/promoted by a massive Hollywood Studio. Instead this story would most likely be produced by companies that mainly produce horror films such as: Hammer. Hammer Film Productions is a film production company based in the United Kingdom. Founded in 1934, the company is best known for a series of gothic "Hammer Horror" films made from the mid-1950s until the 1970s.
The photos used in my storyboard are main shots to the story line. Its gets the main plot across to the viewer. But there would be more storyline in-between these shots, where the characters personalities and own stories would be developed, along with the initial vampire seen in the establishing shot, appearing to kill more people and chaos being unleashed as vampires are being created and attacking innocent victims. As the last shot shows Paul escaping and Ellen left for dead, there is no actual reference to whether she is actually dead or not, meaning there is potential for a sequel.  Horror films don’t have to have rational explanation of events where as Thriller might do e.g: if people die in a thriller they stay dead; in a horror film they may come back to life,  in the sequel Ellen might come back to life just how Dracula returns from the dead in; Dracula: Prince of Darkness (1966). 
I used the black and white style of shot during the 3 shots to show a passage of time and that this was a flashback. I got this idea from such films as: Raging Bull (Scorsese 1980) in which the story looks back to boxing in the post-war period.  Also I did incorporate some use of symbolism. This can be seen with Ellen’s character being dressed in near enough all black to show the evilness she has encountered and will inflict upon Paul, and the use of a bright blue top to show at the beginning she was an average nice girl. Pauls character when he is first introduced is seen to be wearing red shoes to show that he is about to encounter danger. 
When I was first devising my storyboard I created a far too complicated story line, which would take a lot of effort to create and I did not have the time to do so. Therefore I did a re-draft of the story to make it much more simple and do-able. I still stuck with the basic story line from the original idea but adapted it, to make it more suitable and realistic to create. Once it came to actually taking the shots (the photography) there was no major issues which I countered. However, one issue was it was quite bright on the day I took the photos, so I had to try and find darker places within the location to shoot from. This was resolved by darken the photos once put on the computer. Another practical difficulty was making the fake blood and applying it on the actors. It was hard to find some of the ingredients needed to make the fake blood and once on the actors, they had to be very careful with what they touched etc.
I gained new knowledge from creating the storyboard such as: I now know how to frame a shot to get the best possible effect/reaction from it and a greater understanding of camera angles. I learnt how to give direction to actors and step into the shoes of what it’s like to be a director.
Overall, I am very pleased by my storyboard and enjoyed working on it and editing the shots etc. 


Photographic Storyboard


Shot 1: This is the establishing shot of Ellen being attacked by a stranger who turns out to be a vampire. The wide shot is used to establish the setting of this story and to show the environment Ellen is in - An isolated forest. Isolated locations are a common convention of horror films. It is shot using a black and white effect to show that, this was in the past and a flashback to the forthcoming story line.



Shot 2: A high angle shot of Ellen after she has been attacked, lying unconscious on the floor. The high angle is used to make Ellen look submissive as she is seen to be left for dead and in a weak position. Yet again a black and white effect is used to show this to be a flashback .



Shot 3: This is a close up of blood dripping down Ellens neck, after she has been bitten by the vampire. It has been used to show the detail and specifics of the attack, so that the audience will start to gather the idea that she has been attacked by a vampire. As in most 'vampire movies' the vampire bites the victims neck. Like the previous shots, this shot has the black and white effect, as this was in the past. 


Shot 4: High angle shot of Ellen after she awakes from her ordeal; its used to show her as weak due to her not understanding what has happened to her. The shot is now in colour so the audience can realise that this is present time. Ellen is seen to be crying as she is frightened over what has happened but notice how she is crying blood. Another convention of the 'vampire movie' is that they cry blood. The lighting is low key lighting too, as low key lighting is another convention to horror films. Also, due to the fact that vampire's can not be in direct sunlight (a convention) and the forest is sheltered from sunlight due to the trees. 



Shot 5: Medium shot of Ellen getting up, she is clearly upset and touches her neck due to feeling a pain there. 



Shot 6: A close up on her hand to show the blood which has came from touching her neck. The character now realises that she has an injury to her neck and it feels like teeth marks. 


Shot 7: Long shot of Ellen staggering about, after getting up off the ground. You can clearly see by her body language that she is dazed and confused. And is still in an isolated surrounding. 



Shot 8: Long Shot showing Ellen walking out of the forest into sunlight, she realises something is wrong as the sunlight is making her feel a burning sensation on her skin. (Convention of 'vampire movies' is that vampire's get burned by direct sunlight). Her skin is more pale too, showing a glowing of the sun on her.



Shot 9: Over the shoulder shot of her re-entering the forest, as she realises she is not affected in there. 



Shot 10: Close up of Ellen touching her fangs as she realises something is not right and feels strange. This is the first time the audience become fully aware that Ellen is a vampire as 'fangs' are seen as the most important feature to a vampire and would naturally associate them to her being one. 



Shot 11: Medium/close up of Ellen looking into her pocket mirror, only to see she has no reflection!!! Vampires having no reflection is another convention. She has now fully realised that she is indeed a vampire. 



Shot 12: Long Shot of Paul, a average teenager boy taking a stroll through the forest. 



Shot 13: Long Shot of Ellen sitting by a tree. She smells Paul's fresh blood and is alerted by this. Her vampire instincts start to kick in. 



Shot 14: Medium Shot of Ellen ready to attack her prey. Her body language shows this through her hand turning into a claw shape ... ready to grab him!!! Also by her mouth being open in a gritted shape. The audience is able to see Paul's facial expression of worry as he realises something is behind him. The audience at this point should start to feel the tension building, as she is now seen as the antagonist.



Shot 15: Extreme Close Up of Ellen biting into Paul's neck. The audience should now become scared of Ellen's character as she is now seen official as 'the monster' due to her carrying out the attack. 




Shot 16: Medium/Long Shot of the struggle which Paul now faces as Ellen has attacked him and got him in a weak position on the ground. Paul is seen as defenseless as  Ellen is in a more dominate position and Paul's arm is in mid air to show his helplessness. 



Shot 17: Low angle of Ellen looking down on Paul to make her the more powerful and dominant character.  



Shot 18: High Angle of Paul to make him seem like the weaker and submissive character. 



Shot 19: Medium Shot of Paul grabbing a chunk of wood to use to defend himself from Ellen. By the intense facial expression of Ellen you can tell she wants to kill him as Paul desperately tries to reach the wood. 



Shot 20: Medium Shot of Paul 'staking' Ellen through the heart with the wood. The 'staking of the heart' with a 'piece of wood' is also a common feature to vampire movies. 


Shot 21: High Angle of Ellen dying on the ground. The power status has now  changed as previously Paul was shot from a high angle, Ellen is now seen as the weaker character as she is shot form this angle. It is framed doing a dutch tilt, to make the audience feel uneasy about the goings on and also to show the power shift. 


Shot 22: Medium/Close up on Ellen's face she is now bleeding from the mouth due to being 'staked' in the heart. Shot from a high angle again to show her as the weak character. She now appears to be dead. 


Shot 23: Long shot of Paul running away to safety in the distance and Ellen left for dead on the ground. The 'monster' has now been defeated and the audience should feel revealed at this sight as the protagonist of Paul has managed to escape. 

Storyboard



After looking over my draft storyboard I realised the story I had planned out was too complicated to complete within my timeframe. I decided to re-draft the story line, still using the basic story line from the original but to a more appropriate one which I would be able to complete without too much hassle being involved. This is the new plan for my photographic storyboard: 

Second Draft: 

Location: Sutton Park 'the forest' 

Shot 1) Establishing/long shot of person biting Ellen's neck
Shot 2) Medium shot of Ellen lying on ground
Shot 3) Extreme close up on the neck bite

(all above shots to be shot in black and white)

Shot 4) Ellen wakes up, close up on worried face
Shot 5) Medium close up of Ellen touching her neck/bite
Shot 6) Close up of blood on fingers
Shot 7) Ellen staggers out of forest, long shot
Shot 8) She steps into sunlight, arm covering face, sickly expression on face, as she feels a burning sensation, medium/long shot
Shot 9) Turns back into forest
Shot 10) Extreme close up on her touching her fangs
Shot 11) She pulls out a mirror but appears to have no reflection
Shot 12) Paul walks into forest, long shot
Shot 13) Ellen seen crouching down, head lifts up at the smell of fresh blood
Shot 14) Ellen seen now to be standing behind Paul medium/long shot
Shot 15) She bites Paul's neck
Shot 16) Medium shot of the struggle
Shot 17) High angle of Ellen 
Shot 18) Low angle of Paul
Shot 19) Paul grabs piece of wood 'the stake' medium/close up
Shot 20) Paul stakes Ellen in the heart medium/close up
Shot 21) Ellen seen dying on ground
Shot 22) Close up on Ellens face, now dead, blood coming out of mouth
Shot 23) Ellens dead body and Paul running away in the distance


Introduction

My name is Laura Sheasby. Welcome to my AS Film Studies blog. I will be using ‘blogspot’ to show my coursework, for the photographic storyboard. 

My photographic storyboard is going to be based on 'vampire movies' a sub genre of the horror genre. The storyboard depicts a young female (Ellen) getting unexpectedly attacked and bitten by a stranger, who is a vampire. Ellen awakes after the attack and tries to go and find help her but as she steps into sunlight she starts to feel sick and has a burning sensation on her skin. Once she has returned into the dark forest she touches her teeth to feel that she has fangs!!! Then looks into a pocket mirror to see she has no reflection!!! Paul a young male takes a casual stroll into the forest to then be unexpectedly attacked by Ellen. There is a struggle between them, until Paul grabs a piece of wood and stakes Ellen through the heart, leaving Ellen for dead and Paul running away to safety.