Storyboard

After looking over my draft storyboard I realised the story I had planned out was too complicated to complete within my timeframe. I decided to re-draft the story line, still using the basic story line from the original but to a more appropriate one which I would be able to complete without too much hassle being involved. This is the new plan for my photographic storyboard: 

Second Draft: 

Location: Sutton Park 'the forest' 

Shot 1) Establishing/long shot of person biting Ellen's neck

Shot 2) Medium shot of Ellen lying on ground

Shot 3) Extreme close up on the neck bite

(all above shots to be shot in black and white)

Shot 4) Ellen wakes up, close up on worried face

Shot 5) Medium close up of Ellen touching her neck/bite

Shot 6) Close up of blood on fingers

Shot 7) Ellen staggers out of forest, long shot

Shot 8) She steps into sunlight, arm covering face, sickly expression on face, as she feels a burning sensation, medium/long shot

Shot 9) Turns back into forest

Shot 10) Extreme close up on her touching her fangs

Shot 11) She pulls out a mirror but appears to have no reflection

Shot 12) Paul walks into forest, long shot

Shot 13) Ellen seen crouching down, head lifts up at the smell of fresh blood

Shot 14) Ellen seen now to be standing behind Paul medium/long shot

Shot 15) She bites Paul's neck

Shot 16) Medium shot of the struggle

Shot 17) High angle of Ellen 

Shot 18) Low angle of Paul

Shot 19) Paul grabs piece of wood 'the stake' medium/close up

Shot 20) Paul stakes Ellen in the heart medium/close up

Shot 21) Ellen seen dying on ground

Shot 22) Close up on Ellens face, now dead, blood coming out of mouth

Shot 23) Ellens dead body and Paul running away in the distance